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Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Please proofread your press releases.

Here's the headline of a poor press release that arrived in my inbox today:

Pennsylvania Business Owners have a Strong
New Allie in Pennsylvania
The Pennsylvania Commercial Action Network Launch

The rest of the release is as poor as the headline. Here's an irresistible excerpt:

PaCAN multiplies the effectiveness of business owners in the public policy arena by organizing them into apotent coalition.

Yes, quite apotent.

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